Blue Fairy

hehehe! they're great :D

I agree with Vivela. If you start something in a really negative way saying you don't really care that much then people aren't going to want to read it.

Hahaha this was quite funny. Your mind difinitely works in a strange way. Milkmen rock!!! :D Hope you get bored again soon

Reading chapter two has definitely made me want to read more because I wasn't really sure where you were going with it in chapter one. :D I still don't understand ...

I think you need to slow everything down more and describe whats going on and the surroundings more clearly. You seem to jump in with Javier a bit quickly then ...

Gwen, I love your hair!! I want that guitar. pretty Naomi. yay hello Jared! :D

How is the new character going to come into the flock? where is she going to appear? Are we just going to leave Blade's body were it is? shall we ...

(Rose) Rose ran across the ground away from Lexy and Stella, her hair whipping her face. She tore over to Blade her whole body shaking with shock. Blade lay still ...

hehe didnt know this exsisted I'll go wherever you lot go, not bothered what happens (Not that i dont care about the storybook) I love the drama! :D

(Rose) Lexy gently tried to shrug off Rose's hand. She was staring at the ground, avoiding the waiting looks from the flock. She sighed and closed her eyes. Rose's ankle ...

erm yeah so...I was just planning to insult as many people as possible with this book...hope you enjoy it

(Hannah and Ivy) Ivy hovered a little way behind the boy, hiding next to a table. The boy was face to face with Henry now. Hannah was behind Henry's arm. ...

*I thought he would be helping fight off idiots because he said he doesnt hang out with the pranksters any more. have fun

(Rose) Rose swirled round between everyone as they flew quickly, following Reed. He was glancing down to the ground. Rose dipped underneath him and tried to see what he saw. ...

That's crazy!!! :D